Tweaked descriptions for broader distribution

5 files changed, 13 insertions, 13 deletions

diff --git a/items/286ecfb2fe5443bbbe0b56678cbe02d9.yaml b/items/286ecfb2fe5443bbbe0b56678cbe02d9.yaml
index dcfd166..f9c3d26 100644
--- a/items/286ecfb2fe5443bbbe0b56678cbe02d9.yaml
+++ b/items/286ecfb2fe5443bbbe0b56678cbe02d9.yaml
@@ -7,6 +7,6 @@ address: |
   Sede legale: Via Occidentale 113
   66016 Guardiagrele, (Ch)
 comments: |
-  Suggested by my friend Morena, who knows them personally. Morena says:
-  «They also sell zafferano di Navelli, peperoni cruschi, Pecorino di
-  Farindola and other delicacies.»
+  Suggested by a friend who knows them personally, and says: «They also sell
+  zafferano di Navelli, peperoni cruschi, Pecorino di Farindola and other
+  delicacies.»
diff --git a/items/a728f3b4ca554b9ba97e718c6b344761.yaml b/items/a728f3b4ca554b9ba97e718c6b344761.yaml
index 7819d1a..b27c9c5 100644
--- a/items/a728f3b4ca554b9ba97e718c6b344761.yaml
+++ b/items/a728f3b4ca554b9ba97e718c6b344761.yaml
@@ -10,8 +10,8 @@ address: |
   Cell. +39 388 6151567
 comments: |
   Their site is rather broken at the moment. One can use email to ask for a
-  catalog and order. My friend Morena knows them personally and says:
-  «Cacio Sopravvissano, also nicknamed "sopravvissuto" ("survived", since that
-  area has been hit by a devastating earthquake in 2016), is what Scolastici
-  makes together with other shepherds. So if you buy it from Scolasticy, you
-  support all the producers.
+  catalog and order. A friend knows them personally and says: «Cacio
+  Sopravvissano, also nicknamed "sopravvissuto" ("survived", since that area
+  has been hit by a devastating earthquake in 2016), is what Scolastici makes
+  together with other shepherds. So if you buy it from Scolastici, you support
+  all the producers.
diff --git a/items/c1719751b4564f5a91c7b9f656880f5b.yaml b/items/c1719751b4564f5a91c7b9f656880f5b.yaml
index b9173b4..3e462c9 100644
--- a/items/c1719751b4564f5a91c7b9f656880f5b.yaml
+++ b/items/c1719751b4564f5a91c7b9f656880f5b.yaml
@@ -12,5 +12,5 @@ comments: |
   shipping abroad has higher costs, and looking for the same wines on online
   wine brokers might end up being cheaper.
   .
-  Everything is good. Their Gewürztraminer BRENNTAL is in my opinion a
-  masterpiece, can age indefinitely, and keeps evolving with age.
+  Everything is good. Their Gewürztraminer BRENNTAL is one of my favourites,
+  can age indefinitely, and keeps evolving with age.
diff --git a/items/c5c0c1c23eb54a08a6cd3652396a44cd.yaml b/items/c5c0c1c23eb54a08a6cd3652396a44cd.yaml
index b8330c6..0c34a75 100644
--- a/items/c5c0c1c23eb54a08a6cd3652396a44cd.yaml
+++ b/items/c5c0c1c23eb54a08a6cd3652396a44cd.yaml
@@ -7,6 +7,6 @@ address: |
   Struttura COMPAGNIA DEI MASTRI ARTIGIANI DI VISSO
   62039 Visso MC
 comments: |
-  Recommended by my friend Morena who knows them personally. High quality
+  Recommended by a friend Morena who knows them personally. High quality
   meats. There is no shop on the website, but one can phone or write them to
   inquire about products and order.
diff --git a/items/fa20c57e85d04cbf8da35e48ac699baf.yaml b/items/fa20c57e85d04cbf8da35e48ac699baf.yaml
index 01bc358..aea12c1 100644
--- a/items/fa20c57e85d04cbf8da35e48ac699baf.yaml
+++ b/items/fa20c57e85d04cbf8da35e48ac699baf.yaml
@@ -6,5 +6,5 @@ address: |
         via Nicotera 6
         91023 Favignana (TP)
 comments: |
-  They also have uncommon tuna products like buzzonaglia, which is fantastic
-  for pasta.
+  They also have uncommon tuna products like buzzonaglia, which can be used for
+  a very interesting pasta sauce.